RelNotes: minor fixups before 2.51.1

Grammar and typo fixes. Also change “work it around” to “work around”.

Signed-off-by: Kristoffer Haugsbakk <[email protected]>
Signed-off-by: Junio C Hamano <[email protected]>

Author: LemmingAvalanche

Documentation/RelNotes/2.51.1.adoc

@@ -3,7 +3,7 @@ Git 2.51.1 Release Notes
 
 There shouldn't be anything exciting to see here.  This is primarily
 to flush the "do you still use it?" improvements that has landed on
-the master front, together with a handful of low-hanging low-impact
+the master front, together with a handful of low-hanging, low-impact
 fixes that should be safe.
 
 
@@ -22,25 +22,25 @@ Fixes since Git 2.51.0
  * Manual page for "gitk" is updated with the current maintainer's
    name.
 
- * Update the instruction to use of GGG in the MyFirstContribution
+ * Update the instructions for using GGG in the MyFirstContribution
    document to say that a GitHub PR could be made against `git/git`
    instead of `gitgitgadget/git`.
 
- * Clang-format update to let our control macros formatted the way we
+ * Clang-format update to let our control macros be formatted the way we
    had them traditionally, e.g., "for_each_string_list_item()" without
    space before the parentheses.
 
- * A few places where an size_t value was cast to curl_off_t without
+ * A few places where a size_t value was cast to curl_off_t without
    checking has been updated to use the existing helper function.
 
  * The start_delayed_progress() function in the progress eye-candy API
    did not clear its internal state, making an initial delay value
    larger than 1 second ineffective, which has been corrected.
 
  * Makefile tried to run multiple "cargo build" which would not work
-   very well; serialize their execution to work it around.
+   very well; serialize their execution to work around this problem.
 
- * Adjust to the way newer versions of cURL selectivel enables tracing
+ * Adjust to the way newer versions of cURL selectively enable tracing
    options, so that our tests can continue to work.
 
-Also contains various documentation updates, code clean-ups and minor fixups.
+Also contains various documentation updates, code cleanups and minor fixups.