DOCSP-27770 - Remove Placeholders (#74)

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Co-authored-by: Chris Cho <[email protected]>

Author: mongoKart

source/fundamentals/connection/network-compression.txt

@@ -1 +1,5 @@
-.. _csharp-network-compression:
+.. _csharp-network-compression:
+
+===================
+Network Compression
+===================

source/includes/quick-start/atlas-setup.rst

@@ -66,8 +66,7 @@ Take the Free Online Course Taught by MongoDB
 
 .. list-table::
 
-   * - .. cssclass:: bordered-figure
-       .. figure:: /includes/figures/M220N.png
+   * - .. figure:: /includes/figures/M220N.png
           :alt: Banner for the C# MongoDB University Course
 
      - `Using MongoDB with C# <https://learn.mongodb.com/learning-paths/using-mongodb-with-csharp>`__

source/includes/quick-start/next-steps.rst

@@ -14,6 +14,40 @@ Quick Start
 
 .. include:: /includes/quick-start/overview.rst
 
+Create a MongoDB Cluster
+------------------------
+
+Set Up a Free Tier Cluster in Atlas
+~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
+
+To set up your Atlas Free Tier Cluster required for this guide, complete the guide on 
+:guides:`MongoDB Atlas Setup </atlas/account>`.
+
+After completing the steps in the Atlas guide, you have a new MongoDB
+cluster deployed in Atlas, a new database user, and
+:atlas:`sample datasets loaded </sample-data/>` into your cluster. You also have
+a connection string similar to the following in your copy buffer:
+
+.. code-block:: bash
+
+   "mongodb+srv://<username>:<password>@cluster0.abc.mongodb.net/?retryWrites=true&w=majority"
+
+Set Your Connection String
+~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
+
+Run the following code at the command prompt to save your MongoDB connection string to an 
+environment variable. This method is safer than including your credentials in your source 
+code. 
+
+.. code-block:: bash
+
+   export MONGODB_URI='<your MongoDB connection string>'
+
+.. important::
+
+   Make sure to replace the ``<username>`` and ``<password>`` sections of the connection 
+   string with the username and password of your Atlas user.
+
 Set Up Your Project
 -------------------
 
@@ -39,32 +73,21 @@ Use the ``dotnet add`` command to add the {+driver-short+} to your project as a
 
    dotnet add package MongoDB.Driver
 
-Create a MongoDB Cluster
-------------------------
-
-.. include:: /includes/quick-start/atlas-setup.rst
-
 Query Your MongoDB Cluster from Your Application
 ------------------------------------------------
 
-First, save your Atlas connection string to an environment variable named ``MONGODB_URI``. This prevents potential security issues caused by including your credentials in the source code.
+In this step, you'll use the {+driver-short+} 
+to connect to your MongoDB cluster and run a query on the sample data.
 
-.. code-block:: bash
-
-   export MONGODB_URI='<your atlas connection string>'
-
-.. important::
-
-   Make sure to replace the "<username>" and "<password>" sections of the connection string with the username and password of your Atlas user.
-
-Next, open the file named ``Program.cs`` in the base directory of your project. Copy the
+Open the file named ``Program.cs`` in the base directory of your project. Copy the
 following sample code into ``Program.cs`` 
 
 .. literalinclude:: /includes/quick-start/Program.cs
    :language: csharp
    :dedent:
 
-The sample code runs a query against your sample dataset in MongoDB Atlas. Run the sample code with the following command from your command line:
+This sample code runs a query against your sample dataset in MongoDB Atlas. Run it
+from your command line by using the following command:
 
 .. code-block:: bash
 
@@ -81,7 +104,12 @@ After completing this step, you should have a working application that uses
 the {+driver-short+} to connect to your MongoDB cluster, run a query on the
 sample data, and print out the result.
 
+To learn more about connecting to Atlas with the {+driver-short+}, see
+the :atlas:`Atlas driver connection </driver-connection>` guide
+and select :guilabel:`{+language+}` from the :guilabel:`Select your language` dropdown.
+
 Next steps
 ----------
 
-.. include:: /includes/quick-start/next-steps.rst
+Learn how to read and modify data using the {+driver-short+} in the CRUD Operations 
+guide or how to perform common operations in Usage Examples.