DOCSP-14697 correct CSFLE KMS page typos

Author: andf-mongodb

source/core/security-client-side-encryption-key-management.txt

@@ -119,7 +119,7 @@ Encryption Key Vault
 --------------------
 
 The key vault is a collection that stores data encryption keys for use
-with client-side field level encryption. data encryption keys are
+with client-side field level encryption. Data encryption keys are
 encrypted using a Customer Master Key (CMK) managed through a supported
 :ref:`Key Management System (KMS) <field-level-encryption-kms>`.
 
@@ -162,7 +162,7 @@ vault. Applications must have access to both the remote key vault
 cluster and the connection cluster to perform client-side field level
 encryption operations.
 
-data encryption keys have the following structure:
+Data encryption keys have the following structure:
 
 .. code-block:: json
 

source/includes/extracts-client-side-field-level-encryption.yaml

@@ -119,8 +119,8 @@ content: |
 
   .. important::
      
-     For AWS KMS support, use the 4.2.2 :binary:`~bin.mongo` shell. The
-     4.2.0 and 4.2.1 :binary:`~bin.mongo` shell does not support the AWS
-     KMS service due to an unexpected change in the KMS response object.
-     See :issue:`SERVER-44721` for more information on the issue.
-...
+     For AWS KMS support, use the 4.2.2 or later :binary:`~bin.mongo`
+     shell. The 4.2.0 and 4.2.1 :binary:`~bin.mongo` shell does not
+     support the AWS KMS service due to an unexpected change in the KMS
+     response object. See :issue:`SERVER-44721` for more information.
+...