NR PR fixes 2

Author: rustagir

source/get-started/pojo-qs.txt

@@ -7,12 +7,12 @@ Quick Start (POJO Examples)
 .. contents:: On this page
    :local:
    :backlinks: none
-   :depth: 1
+   :depth: 2
    :class: singlecol
 
-This guide follows from the :ref:`Quick Start guide
+This guide is similar to the :ref:`Quick Start guide
 <javars-quickstart>` but uses Plain Old Java Objects, or POJOs, to
-model documents.
+model documents instead of the generic ``Document`` class.
 
 The code examples in this guide come from the `PojoQuickTour.java
 <{+driver-source-gh+}/blob/master/driver-reactive-streams/src/examples/reactivestreams/tour/PojoQuickTour.java>`__
@@ -197,10 +197,10 @@ filter objects, the driver provides ``Filters`` helper methods.
 .. important::
 
    When querying POJOs, you *must* query against the document field name
-   and not the POJO property name. By default, they are the same but it
+   and not the POJO property name. They are the same by default, but it
    is possible to change how POJO property names are mapped.
 
-Get A Single Person That Matches a Filter
+Get a Single Person That Matches a Filter
 ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
 
 The following example finds the first ``Person`` in the database that
@@ -248,7 +248,7 @@ Pass the following parameters to the methods:
   the available operators, see :manual:`Update Operators
   </reference/operator/update/>` in the Server manual.
 
-The update methods return an ``UpdateResult`` type which provides
+The update methods return an ``UpdateResult`` type that provides
 information about the operation, including the number of documents
 modified by the update.
 
@@ -258,7 +258,7 @@ Update a Single Person
 To update a single ``Person``, use the ``updateOne()`` method.
 
 The following example updates a ``Person`` named ``"Ada Byron"`` by
-setting their age to ``23`` and name to ``Ada Lovelace``:
+setting their age to ``23`` and name to ``"Ada Lovelace"``:
 
 .. code-block:: java
 
@@ -305,7 +305,7 @@ Pass a filter object to match the document or
 documents to delete. To specify an empty filter, use an empty
 ``Document`` object.
 
-The delete methods return a ``DeleteResult`` type which provides
+The delete methods return a ``DeleteResult`` type that provides
 information about the operation, including the number of documents
 deleted.
 

source/get-started/quickstart.txt

@@ -7,7 +7,7 @@ Quick Start
 .. contents:: On this page
    :local:
    :backlinks: none
-   :depth: 1
+   :depth: 2
    :class: singlecol
 
 The code examples in this guide come from the `QuickTour.java
@@ -440,7 +440,7 @@ Pass the following parameters to the methods:
   the available operators, see :manual:`Update Operators
   </reference/operator/update/>` in the Server manual.
 
-The update methods return an ``UpdateResult`` type which provides
+The update methods return an ``UpdateResult`` type that provides
 information about the operation, including the number of documents
 modified by the update.
 
@@ -482,7 +482,7 @@ documents to delete. To facilitate creating filter objects, the driver
 provides ``Filters`` helper methods. To specify an empty filter and
 match all documents in the collection, use an empty ``Document`` object.
 
-The delete methods return a ``DeleteResult`` which provides
+The delete methods return a ``DeleteResult`` that provides
 information about the operation, including the number of documents
 deleted.