intro: rephrase goal to a clear contrast #194
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Signed-off-by: Daniel Maslowski <[email protected]>
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Oct 2, 2025
| initiatives with the overarching goal of moving from obscure and complex | ||
| firmware to simpler and open source firmware. | ||
| initiatives with the overarching goal of moving from obscure and closed source | ||
| firmware to clear and open source firmware. |
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It is currently a bit of a weird paragraph, I imagine from trying to rework the original text. Basically it reads like, "There is this idea, that spawned a project that focused on the idea", and thereby defines the idea twice slightly differently.
Maybe just keep, "That idea grew into a project that over the years includes various initiatives." And remove the rest of the line. And perhaps update the first sentence to include "open source".
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Yea make sense, I'll rethink it. My main goal here is to be rather endorsing and less hostile in wording. 😅
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