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Various grammatical, typo, formatting tweaks to Istio chapter @ https://eksworkshop.com/servicemesh/

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thank you!

brentley and others added 2 commits November 20, 2018 20:54
Fixed error language message to better illustrate what to expect.
Removing callout
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Added language to address #151

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LGTM!

@brentley brentley merged commit ab707c1 into master Nov 21, 2018
@brentley brentley deleted the istiotweaks branch November 21, 2018 03:36
vjsikha pushed a commit to vjsikha/eks-workshop that referenced this pull request Nov 21, 2018
* Update _index.md

Fixing some grammar and typos.

* Update introduction.md

Fixed some formatting and grammar.

* Update install.md

Cleaning up formatting and grammar.

* Update deploy.md

Fixed grammar and formatting.

* Update routing.md

Grammar and typo fixes.

* Update visualize.md

fixed some grammar and typos

* Update cleanup.md

Cleaning up grammar and typos

* Update routing.md

Fixed error language message to better illustrate what to expect.

* Update _index.md

Removing callout
brentley pushed a commit that referenced this pull request Nov 21, 2018
* Content review and edits. Added Challenge Questions

* added challenge question for user to retrieve the elb URL

* updated the shortcode to fix the launch button for codepipeline

* Batch Processing (redux) (#133)

* Batch Processing Workshop (all except advanced example)

* Add advanced batch example

* Updates based on feedback on PR-133

* Change S3 bucket creation to use AWSCLI

* Add IAM policy for artifact S3 access

* Add removal instructions for S3 IAM policy

* Duplicate ACCOUNT_ID creation per code block where it's used

* Clean S3 IAM policy steps

* Fix error in ConfigMap for artifact repository (manual substitution)

* Delete non-empty bucket

* Link fixes (#135)

* updating to support cloud9 dev environment

* updating repo urls for consistency

* commit the link fixes

* Tracing with X-Ray module (#132)

* Tracing with X-Ray module

* Change urls to deployed version

* Fix links (#137)

* added documentation and examples to demo readiness and liveness probes (#131)

* added documentation and examples to demo readiness and liveness probes

* simplified text boxes for commands, added additional explanation about how probes work and tweaked readiness probe

* added step to make readiness probe pass after failure

* updated the folder structure to reflect http paths and guidelines

* updated the pages to show and explain the yaml files instead of simply downloading the same

* minor edits to add clarity

* remove duplicate page (using.md/rolling_back.md) (#140)

* updating to support cloud9 dev environment

* updating repo urls for consistency

* remove duplicate instructions page?

* Dynamic Volume Provisioning hyperlink (#141)

* adding calico chapter

* deleting calico in cleanup step

* changing notice from note(blue) to tip(green)

* changing chapter weight to fit between example microservices and helm

* adding uninstall calico text

* separated command from the output

* reverting changes to package-lock.json

* adding all changes except yaml creation

* changing calico resources from links to local files

* moved cloning the repo from prereqs to calico chapter

* changed dynamic volue hyperlink to k8s doc

* Update _index.md (#144)

minor grammar changes

* Challenge question and answer to Monitoring Chapter (#146)

* adding monitoring using prometheus & grafana chapter

* changing draft: false

* minor change to grafana dashboards

* adding challenge question & offering solution

* formatting changes - removed  for re-emphasizing

* minor change with relative links

* Remove region (#148)

* Remove region

* fixing backticks

* adding a region selector (#154)

* Added challenge question to installnginx.md (#145)

* Added challenge question to installnginx.md

Challenge question provides clues for the correct helm install syntax.
Workshop participant can either figure out the syntax themselves or
expand the hidden text for the correct command.

* Updated Challenge Formatting and Module Wording

Changed the formatting of the challenge to match the requested
styling. Made the warning about the ELB creation time more obvious.
Miscellaneous wording corrections.

* Istiotweaks (#153)

* Update _index.md

Fixing some grammar and typos.

* Update introduction.md

Fixed some formatting and grammar.

* Update install.md

Cleaning up formatting and grammar.

* Update deploy.md

Fixed grammar and formatting.

* Update routing.md

Grammar and typo fixes.

* Update visualize.md

fixed some grammar and typos

* Update cleanup.md

Cleaning up grammar and typos

* Update routing.md

Fixed error language message to better illustrate what to expect.

* Update _index.md

Removing callout

* fixing typo in health checks (#155)

* adding monitoring using prometheus & grafana chapter

* changing draft: false

* minor change to grafana dashboards

* adding challenge question & offering solution

* formatting changes - removed  for re-emphasizing

* minor change with relative links

* fixing typo in health checks chapter

* minor improvements in health check chapter

* update Batch cleanup.md (#142)

Added command to map $ROLE_NAME in case this was lost

* Simplify CFN stack creation (#156)

* Calico logo, note in StatefulSets -- Test scaling and Batch -- simple workflow (#143)

* adding calico chapter

* deleting calico in cleanup step

* changing notice from note(blue) to tip(green)

* changing chapter weight to fit between example microservices and helm

* adding uninstall calico text

* separated command from the output

* reverting changes to package-lock.json

* adding all changes except yaml creation

* changing calico resources from links to local files

* moved cloning the repo from prereqs to calico chapter

* changed dynamic volue hyperlink to k8s doc

* changed calico chapter index image to official project calico logo

* added a note for pods scaling duration

* replaced workflow name from command with placeholder

* improved changes introduced in commit 5f627f6

* added challenge question for user to retrieve the elb URL

* resolved conflicts after rebasing from master

* added hint to challenge question

* Content review and edits. Added Challenge Questions (#147)

* fixed typo in role name. moved challenge question. cleaned up typos.

* reverted cf-launch.html changes

* reverted codepipeline.md changes for launch button
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